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原帖由 晴~晴 於 2007-5-16 10:11 PM 發表
有2篇短文要作..
幫幫我做牙...我吾識做牙..?!

要6年級程度..要有少少錯..吾係錯晒果隻..
要有中文板..pm我比我
1''Favourite Festival..
What is your favourite festival? What do you do at that  festival?
Write the festival that you like in about 30 words.
2''family Day
Do you enjoy spending time with your family?Is there a favourite place you go with them?
What is your favourite activity? In about 30 words.

我念你交左啦
但係都寫低一個較好版本比你
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Lunar new year is my favourite festival. In the new year holiday, I usually find my relatives and ask them give me porket money. In additional, I usually visit relatives with my family members in order to see their faces and how much they change.
2
I think those families have family day. As you know, in that day, childern will play with adults who have no time spending on their family members in other days. It is quite often to see that many families will go to have a good dine in the morning. I quite enjoy the dinning as I can have tasty food.

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