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2008-1-12 03:54 PM 戀愛妄想症×]`
好好睇丫`suP`
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2008-1-12 04:01 PM ×戀愛玻璃瓶__}
我係新讀者丫`
h0 h0睇也^v^`
suP''

2008-1-12 04:14 PM wunik
nO.8

好快就到左中秋果日la~(藍田MTR)

ar茵一個人係MTR到等左勁耐...都唔見有人黎.....

(ar茵電話)

ar茵:喂?!邊個ar?!~

ar豪:我ar,ar豪...我到左la~你同Nico呢?

ar茵:我都黎左好耐la~NIco都重未黎~

ar豪:你係邊ar~藍田MTR丫ma~

ar茵:我都係ar~唔見你ge~?

ar豪:我見到你la~你金日係唔係著白色3+件短牛仔庫ga?

ar茵:係ar係ar~你係邊ar,我見唔到你ge?

ar豪:得la~我而家黎搵你。8左先...

ar茵:OK~

30秒左右....

ar豪係ar茵後面出現,重拍左一下佢tim~

ar茵:邊x個,想博懞ar~(勁惡)

ar豪:我ar,玩下姐唔洗咁惡ar ma~我會驚驚ga~(扮晒驚咁)

ar茵:我點知係你姐~冇扮野好啵....

ar豪:我邊有ar~(重扮野)唉...岩岩差d唔認得左你ar~

ar茵:梗係la~我地之前見過一之ga je~唔記得都冇咩出奇丫!~

ar豪:唔係ar~我覺得你個樣變左ar~

ar茵:唉....我知ga la~我又樣衰左丫ma~

ar豪:唔係ar~我係話你靚左勁多ar~

ar茵:你呃人ge~(見到妮跑緊過黎)喂~睇下NIco黎緊la~

ar豪:妮姐~你都好早下姐~

ar妮:唔係唔係~我其實一早就黎左ga la~不過見到你地傾得咁Happy咪唔想阻住你地lo~

ar茵:遲到你就遲到la~重咁多籍口,金日果餐係你ga la~

ar妮:咁唔好講la~走la~

ar豪:唔得~我重有一個fd黎梗....(見到佢個fd)

ar軒:HI~我叫ar軒ar~我係ar豪個fd~我地而家走得ga la~

因為佢一出場就係咁係到講野~所以ar妮,ar茵都係到係咁望住佢~

ar軒:兩位靚女~唔知我係唔係生得太靚仔呢~你地係咁望住我~

ar茵:我完全唔覺得你靚仔lo(雖然佢真係幾靚仔)~只係你太多x話講la~

ar軒:你係第一個話我唔靚仔ge人黎ga~我記住你~(對ar茵有左d好感)

ar妮:咁我做第二個丫~哈哈~^^

ar豪:唔好再係到9 up la~走la~

....就係咁傾下傾下就到左Ocean Park la~........

係果到ar茵係咁要玩d勁激ge野....但妮就驚到傻左~

ar茵:死PK~你玩就玩la~你睇下你捉到我隻手種晒la~開心la~

ar妮:我都唔想ga~都係你叫我陪你玩你ge~重+上我真係幾開心ga~

ar茵:你條PK丫,你咪走ar~(追住佢)

ar妮:彩你都傻~(係咁走)

ar豪:佢地兩個傻左ar~(對眼係咁望住ar茵)

ar軒:唔唔~(發現佢係咁望住ar茵),你係唔又係想溝ar茵ar~

ar豪:又?唔通你都係?

ar軒:係ar~咁姐係我地而家係情敵黎ga la~

ar豪:咁又係......

ar妮:我地想去一去廁所ar~(勁大聲)

....*廁所*....

ar茵:得未ar~

ar妮:就得la~等多陣丫~

就係呢個時候ar茵見到一個男仔走過黎~

ar茵:你....點解會係到ga~你唔係跟蹤我黎ga ma~

男仔:係又ar~

ar茵:我都話左我係唔會......(突然個男仔仆左佢一野,咁ar茵就暈低左la)

ar妮出左黎..見到ar茵暈左...

ar妮:你做咩ar~冇事丫ma~喂喂..(哎呀..佢又比人仆左佢一野所以又暈左...)

10min後.....

ar豪:你覺唔覺有d唔妥ar?佢地去左好x耐la~

ar軒:唔唔~我地不如去睇下,lo~

....*廁所*....

ar軒:佢地唔到啵~唔通佢地走左....

ar豪:唔會ga~你睇下,呢d係唔係血黎ga~?(指住地下)

ar軒:好似係啵~call 下佢地先....唔通ar~

咁到底ar茵,ar妮佢地兩個會點呢?

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2008-1-12 05:25 PM bgg24682002
支持十卜你呀~~~

2008-1-12 11:14 PM ☆小婷★
唔知呀茵佢點呢?!
好睇呀,
好想佢呀茵點呀!
十卜十卜呀~=快dpost

2008-1-13 11:45 PM wunik
nO.9

AR妮一醒左就覺得個頭勁痛...一時諗唔起發生左咩事....佢只係記得自己同AR茵係廁所到跟著....

AR妮:係啵~AR茵呢?

跟住妮見到AR茵係鬲離暈左...

AR妮:喂...你點AR~你快D醒LA~喂~!(狂搖AR茵)

AR茵:唔唔~..好痛AR~我地而家係邊AR~我地重比人綁住左TIM AR~

AR妮:我唔知AR~不過我只係知呢到係 一間 勁大GE ROOM 到LO~

AR茵:唔唔~咁我地點算好~?

就係呢個時候個DOOR打開左LA~入黎GE就係AR晶....

AR茵:又係你AR~你金次又想點AR~

AR晶:你話呢...你睇下你令到我塊臉種晒LA~我要十陪還番比你~

走黎去AR茵身邊...係個3袋到拎把CUTTER出黎...想界洛去...

AR妮:唔好AR~

AR晶:心痛AR~?我知GA LA~係因為佢我地先唔可以一齊JE MA~我只要界花佢塊臉你就唔會再鍾意佢GA LA~就會同我一齊GA LA~

AR妮:你死心LA~我係唔會鍾意你GA~因為我唔係基GA~重有AR~我同CANDY只係E FD JE~

AR晶:你講大話,我係唔會信你GA~你只係唔想我傷害佢JE MA~我就偏偏要~(想界洛去)

AR傑:喂~STOP AR~你唔係話我地捉左佢地之後係唔會傷害佢地GE咩?

AR強:我真係估唔到你係鍾意NICO GA  LO~

AR傑,AR強:我地係唔會比你傷害佢地GA~

跟住佢地就同AR晶D人係到打LA~

AR晶:你睇下個AR傑咁愛你你點解唔同佢一齊要搶我GE NICO AR~(勁激動,諗住界洛去)

突然...一張椅車左埋黎...車中左AR晶,AR晶訓低左係到....

AR豪:我地黎救你地LA~你地冇事丫MA?

AR妮:我地比人綁住左AR~

AR軒k我而家黎幫你~

跟住AR豪,AR軒就救埋AR傑,AR強佢地LA~同埋AR茵,AR妮係咁走...但係因為AR晶重有勁多人追住佢地....

到底佢地會唔會走得到呢?

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2008-1-14 05:57 AM (0(00)0)
New reader ar!^^

十卜!

2008-1-14 04:49 PM ☆小婷★
好好睇呀,
十卜十卜呀~
thx~

2008-1-14 05:23 PM ×戀愛玻璃瓶__}
h0 h0睇呀`
suP''!
期待p0sT`

2008-1-14 05:35 PM wunik
nO.10

AR茵:咁樣好似唔係好掂咁啵~我CALL下我AR哥先...

AE邦:喂~邊個?

AR茵:係我AR~我而家比勁多人追AR~你快D叫D人黎救我地LA~(係咁走緊)

AR邦k~咁你地而家係邊AR~

AR茵:我唔知AR~我只係知呢到有個好大GE貨倉,好似叫xx貨倉AR~

AR邦:好LA~我地好快就到GA LA~你頂著AR~

AR茵:盡量LA~(CUT左線)

AR晶D跟班:你地班死x樣同我企係到AR...

AR妮:唔得LA~佢地就追到我地LA~我地點算AR?

跟著佢地真係比班pk追到左...AR豪,AR軒,AR傑,AR強就係咁同D人打..而AR茵,AR妮就比D人捉住左~

因為對方太多人所以AR豪,AR軒,AR傑,AR強就比人圍LA~

就全呢個時候...大約50幾個人走緊埋黎...

AR茵:AR哥~快D黎救佢地AR~佢地...(比人合埋左個口)

跟住AR邦D人就同AR晶D人打LA~唔洗講都知係AR邦D人 WIN左LA~

過左冇耐...AR晶D人走晒...

AR邦:AR妹你冇事丫MA~

AR茵:我冇事,快D睇下AR豪,AR軒,AR傑,AR強佢地LA~喂喂~你地冇事丫MA~

AR豪:邦哥...原來...

AR邦:(唔比佢講完就,指住AR豪問)你係唔係我個妹條仔AR?你叫咩名AR~

AR妮:你地咪玩住先LA~我地係唔係應該送佢地去e院先AR~

AR軒:係AR,係AR~我隻腳好似斷斷地咁AR~(搖下隻腳,扮野)

                                               .........E院....

ar茵:E生...佢地點ar?

E生:佢地冇乜野ge~只要打個石膏,住番3,5,7日E院就得ga la~(走左)

ar妮:咁都叫做冇野ar?

E生:講下笑姐...其實佢地都係普通傷姐....一陣就出得院ga la~(走左)

ar茵:E生你個笑話都真係幾好笑啵~=.=

ar妮:...我地入去睇下佢地lo~

ar茵:好呀~

ar茵:喂~你死得未ar?(打ar豪隻腳)

ar豪K~痛ga~你傻ga?~!

ar茵:就係知你痛先打你,如果唔係打你做乜...

ar軒:嘩~!乜你咁對我地ga~話晒都係我地救左你啵...

ar妮:我地冇叫你救ga~

ar邦:ar妹...我好肚餓ar~你洛去buy d野我食丫~

ar軒,ar豪:我又要....

ar茵:使人唔使本ga~你地班人丫~食死你地ar~

ar妮:咪ga la~姐姐陪你la~(玩野)

*佢地兩個出左去之後....

ar豪:岩岩做咩唔比我講你係我大佬ar?

ar邦:我唔想比ar茵知你係同我做野ga~

ar豪:點解?

ar邦:你睇下....佢而家成日都比人搞住...我叫d人去跟住佢佢就一定唔肯ga la~我一日都唔得閒ge~所以...

ar豪:所以你就想我同佢做fd,同埋保護佢?

ar邦:唔唔~咁你識做la~我要番去先~

*ar茵佢地番左黎之後*

ar茵:有冇搞錯ar佢~又叫人buy野比佢,自己又走左

ar軒:唔好咁la~最多我幫你食晒佢la~

ar茵:你就想....

護士:兩位...我係黎同你地洗傷口GA~洗困A地就可以出院GA LA~

幾MIN後*(出左院LA~)

AR豪:喂喂~我地而家去邊玩好AR?

AR妮:重玩?金日我已經玩夠LA~我而家只係想訓教JE.....

AR軒:下...咁AR~不如我地去打機LO~

佢地打到凌晨3點...

AR茵:唔得LA~我要訓覺覺LA~我走LA~

AR豪:咁你慢慢訓飽佢LA~我地唔走住...

AR茵:唔唔~88~

AR茵:唔該~xx村丫(係的士到)

原?承?一早消散不可??
忠??做感情里的弱?
?前童??于?你?手破?
?穿了你只?我救生圈
就?出海再算
s:愿望并未??你已?我?倦
?在就剩下一堆可悲的?面
g:我每秒也冀盼可?光?倒流
到你?我?天
t:看?以往照片??全程浮?
?口?怎么复原
我不能幸免
你只冷眼看我?作碎片
?天所有承?一早消散不可??(AR茵電話)

AR茵: NICO啵...做咩呢~又話訓覺GE?...(聽緊)喂~做咩AR?

AR妮:(嗌聲).....CANDY....

AR茵:做咩AR你...你做咩嗌AR?

AR妮:我...我...(又嗌)

AR茵:你而家係唔係係屋企AR?

AR妮:唔唔~(重嗌)

AR茵:我而家黎...你唔好走開呀~(同個的士佬講)<---------去yy村丫

*YY村

A男:靚女..做咩自己一個人GA~

AR妮:(嗌...唔理佢地)

B男:比仔飛呀?佢唔要你我要你la~

AR妮:(嗌...都係唔理佢地)

A男K~你嗌x完未ar~好x煩呀...(車左佢一巴)

AR茵:你地做乜x野AR?做咩搞我個FD AR?~!NICO~你冇野丫MA~

AR妮:(望下AR茵...再嗌...)

B男:估唔到靚女個FD都係靚女啵...靚女同我地一齊玩丫..(想摸AR茵條腰)

AR茵:你發夢LA~(車左佢一巴,之後拖住AR妮係咁走..)

B男:死8婆丫...打我..追住佢

一個的士係AR茵前邊....

AR豪:上車LA~

AR茵:唔唔~

*的士果到*

AR茵:你做咩事AR?

AR妮:我DADDY出邊有第個...同個女人番左去大陸...話以後都唔番...而我呀媽又話唔想再番係呢個傷
心地走左LA~

AR茵:咁你家姐呢?

AR妮:佢同佢BF MA~我而家冇屋企LA~

AR茵:你都傻GE~你可以黎我屋企住GA MA~

AR妮:但係...

AR茵:就咁話LA~

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2008-1-15 05:32 PM ×戀愛玻璃瓶__}
h0 h0睇呀`
p0sT啦:]
suP`

2008-1-16 08:41 PM wunik
nO.11

AR茵:咁樣好似唔係好掂咁啵~我CALL下我AR哥先...

AE邦:喂~邊個?

AR茵:係我AR~我而家比勁多人追AR~你快D叫D人黎救我地LA~(係咁走緊)

AR邦k~咁你地而家係邊AR~

AR茵:我唔知AR~我只係知呢到有個好大GE貨倉,好似叫xx貨倉AR~

AR邦:好LA~我地好快就到GA LA~你頂著AR~

AR茵:盡量LA~(CUT左線)

AR晶D跟班:你地班死x樣同我企係到AR...

AR妮:唔得LA~佢地就追到我地LA~我地點算AR?

跟著佢地真係比班pk追到左...AR豪,AR軒,AR傑,AR強就係咁同D人打..而AR茵,AR妮就比D人捉住左~

因為對方太多人所以AR豪,AR軒,AR傑,AR強就比人圍LA~

就全呢個時候...大約50幾個人走緊埋黎...

AR茵:AR哥~快D黎救佢地AR~佢地...(比人合埋左個口)

跟住AR邦D人就同AR晶D人打LA~唔洗講都知係AR邦D人 WIN左LA~

過左冇耐...AR晶D人走晒...

AR邦:AR妹你冇事丫MA~

AR茵:我冇事,快D睇下AR豪,AR軒,AR傑,AR強佢地LA~喂喂~你地冇事丫MA~

AR豪:邦哥...原來...

AR邦:(唔比佢講完就,指住AR豪問)你係唔係我個妹條仔AR?你叫咩名AR~

AR妮:你地咪玩住先LA~我地係唔係應該送佢地去e院先AR~

AR軒:係AR,係AR~我隻腳好似斷斷地咁AR~(搖下隻腳,扮野)

                                               .........E院....

ar茵:E生...佢地點ar?

E生:佢地冇乜野ge~只要打個石膏,住番3,5,7日E院就得ga la~(走左)

ar妮:咁都叫做冇野ar?

E生:講下笑姐...其實佢地都係普通傷姐....一陣就出得院ga la~(走左)

ar茵:E生你個笑話都真係幾好笑啵~=.=

ar妮:...我地入去睇下佢地lo~

ar茵:好呀~

ar茵:喂~你死得未ar?(打ar豪隻腳)

ar豪K~痛ga~你傻ga?~!

ar茵:就係知你痛先打你,如果唔係打你做乜...

ar軒:嘩~!乜你咁對我地ga~話晒都係我地救左你啵...

ar妮:我地冇叫你救ga~

ar邦:ar妹...我好肚餓ar~你洛去buy d野我食丫~

ar軒,ar豪:我又要....

ar茵:使人唔使本ga~你地班人丫~食死你地ar~

ar妮:咪ga la~姐姐陪你la~(玩野)

*佢地兩個出左去之後....

ar豪:岩岩做咩唔比我講你係我大佬ar?

ar邦:我唔想比ar茵知你係同我做野ga~

ar豪:點解?

ar邦:你睇下....佢而家成日都比人搞住...我叫d人去跟住佢佢就一定唔肯ga la~我一日都唔得閒ge~所以...

ar豪:所以你就想我同佢做fd,同埋保護佢?

ar邦:唔唔~咁你識做la~我要番去先~

*ar茵佢地番左黎之後*

ar茵:有冇搞錯ar佢~又叫人buy野比佢,自己又走左

ar軒:唔好咁la~最多我幫你食晒佢la~

ar茵:你就想....

護士:兩位...我係黎同你地洗傷口GA~洗困A地就可以出院GA LA~

幾MIN後*(出左院LA~)

AR豪:喂喂~我地而家去邊玩好AR?

AR妮:重玩?金日我已經玩夠LA~我而家只係想訓教JE.....

AR軒:下...咁AR~不如我地去打機LO~

佢地打到凌晨3點...

AR茵:唔得LA~我要訓覺覺LA~我走LA~

AR豪:咁你慢慢訓飽佢LA~我地唔走住...

AR茵:唔唔~88~

AR茵:唔該~xx村丫(係的士到)

原?承?一早消散不可??
忠??做感情里的弱?
?前童??于?你?手破?
?穿了你只?我救生圈
就?出海再算
s:愿望并未??你已?我?倦
?在就剩下一堆可悲的?面
g:我每秒也冀盼可?光?倒流
到你?我?天
t:看?以往照片??全程浮?
?口?怎么复原
我不能幸免
你只冷眼看我?作碎片
?天所有承?一早消散不可??(AR茵電話)

AR茵: NICO啵...做咩呢~又話訓覺GE?...(聽緊)喂~做咩AR?

AR妮:(嗌聲).....CANDY....

AR茵:做咩AR你...你做咩嗌AR?

AR妮:我...我...(又嗌)

AR茵:你而家係唔係係屋企AR?

AR妮:唔唔~(重嗌)

AR茵:我而家黎...你唔好走開呀~(同個的士佬講)<---------去yy村丫

*YY村

A男:靚女..做咩自己一個人GA~

AR妮:(嗌...唔理佢地)

B男:比仔飛呀?佢唔要你我要你la~

AR妮:(嗌...都係唔理佢地)

A男K~你嗌x完未ar~好x煩呀...(車左佢一巴)

AR茵:你地做乜x野AR?做咩搞我個FD AR?~!NICO~你冇野丫MA~

AR妮:(望下AR茵...再嗌...)

B男:估唔到靚女個FD都係靚女啵...靚女同我地一齊玩丫..(想摸AR茵條腰)

AR茵:你發夢LA~(車左佢一巴,之後拖住AR妮係咁走..)

B男:死8婆丫...打我..追住佢

一個的士係AR茵前邊....

AR豪:上車LA~

AR茵:唔唔~

*的士果到*

AR茵:你做咩事AR?

AR妮:我DADDY出邊有第個...同個女人番左去大陸...話以後都唔番...而我呀媽又話唔想再番係呢個傷
心地走左LA~

AR茵:咁你家姐呢?

AR妮:佢同佢BF MA~我而家冇屋企LA~

AR茵:你都傻GE~你可以黎我屋企住GA MA~

AR妮:但係...

AR茵:就咁話LA~

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