2007-12-2 09:24 PM
☆小婷★
{完}[口語+粗口] {轉貼}我鍾意你║傻氣+可愛
人物介紹:
敏~可愛...傻氣...超多男仔鍾意佢...不過└俊┘開頭就話佢白痴...扮可愛...後尾............
琳~敏既好朋友...人緣好...鍾意耀..
澄~同佢地都係好朋友...好fd...鍾意風...
俊~靚仔一個...為人爆cool...但係好專一
風~靚仔...口花花..鍾意撩女仔...超多女...
耀~靚仔...隨和...好nice..超多女鍾意
暫時咁多...人物會陸續加....
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敏:澄澄...琳琳~你地得未呀?
敏,琳,澄3個一齊住...因為佢地既呀爸呀媽係合作夥伴...所以佢地超fd...
佢地既daddy,mummy成日出chip..冇咩時間理佢地...
澄:未呀...死人凌海琳同我爭次厠呀...
敏:你地一齊用唔得架咩?
澄+琳:唔得...
敏真係冇佢地乎...佢地日日都嗌交,...但係轉個頭又攬頭攬頸...
敏:我唔等你地架啦....
呢句說話一出...佢地就9秒9既速度搞掂晒所有野...
番到學校喇....
敏:新一年新開始....
澄:55...唔知我地3個係咪一班呢?
敏:你想同風一班炸掛?
講中晒...冇聲出....
琳琳係到大叫....
敏:你嗌咩呀?
琳:好野...我同耀一班呀....不過都同你地一班...
敏:兩個都重色軾友..唉...好失望囉.....
澄+琳:你第時有左鍾意既人...就會好似我地咁架啦....
敏:第時先算啦
上到班房..佢地兩個飛起敏...唔同敏坐...兩個一齊坐
之後就有一個超靚仔既人坐左係敏隔離...
不過佢個樣超cool...又串..一d都唔nice
故事正式開始.../
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如果鐘意睇就唔該回下啦~thx
[[i] 本帖最後由 ☆小婷★ 於 2007-12-16 03:36 PM 編輯 [/i]]
2007-12-2 09:24 PM
☆小婷★
CH.2 你個乞人憎下
敏覺得好奇怪...點解佢度度唔坐...偏偏坐係敏隔離...
呢個時候,坐係敏前面既澄澄同琳琳就話啦...
澄+琳:你隔離咪有個靚仔LO..好好同人地溝通啦...
唔知係咪比個男仔聽到...
男:想溝我呀?照下鏡先啦....
敏梗係嬲架啦...
敏:邊個話溝你...你唔好咁自大啦...
男:係咩?哦...你話係咪係囉...
敏:咩我話係就係呀...而係我咩都冇講過...
男;至憎呢D係到扮可愛既女仔
敏:你洗唔洗鬧得咁過份....你個乞人憎...
眼淺既敏已經想喊...佢走左出去班房...
佢跑呀跑...撞到一個人...正想鬧人個陣...見到佢...覺得佢幾靚仔...
X:你無事呀?
敏:冇...
X:你叫咩名呀?我叫歐俊強...
敏:我叫李思敏..
強:你搞咩呀?我撞到你一下炸WO...咁就想喊...
敏:都唔關你事....我只係遇到一個超超超超爆爆爆爆爆爆勁勁勁勁乞人憎既人啫...
強:下...咁誇...你而家去邊呀?唔洗上堂呀?
敏:唔想上呀...
強:你咩班呀?我3D
敏:你講真架?我都係呀...
強:唔想上就唔好上啦...我地去玩啦...
敏:得唔得架?
敏從來都冇試過咁...有D驚...
強:有咩事...我橕住你...
敏:咁呀...
強已經捉住敏隻手...跑入課室攡書包
入到班房....人人都望住佢地兩個拖手...發出D WOW WOW既聲...
拰完書包...佢地就即刻走...琳+澄問敏野...敏都聽唔到...
2007-12-2 09:25 PM
☆小婷★
CH.3 走堂
而俊(坐係敏隔離個男仔)對呢個叫敏既女仔...冇咩感覺...只係覺得佢扮可愛...
敏:你帶我去邊到架?
強:好多小朋友都鍾意去既地方...
敏:下....
原楚強想帶敏去海洋公園....
敏自從10歲之後就冇去過海洋公園...而家去到...覺得好驚喜...
強:行啦...一定會好開心既...
敏佢地玩左好多機動遊戲...敏玩跳樓個陣...強就係下面幫敏影相...
敏落到去睇番D相...即刻"X"左D相...因為好影到佢好醜..
佢地又去左睇盈盈,樂樂...總之就玩得好開心...
玩到6黠個陣...佢地終於捨得走...
強:點呀?玩得開唔開心呀?
敏:開心...開心...好開心...
強:開心就得啦....
敏:咁我地而家去邊呀?
強:去睇戲...食飯...
敏:好呀...除左DADDY,MUMMY,琳琳,澄澄之外....就得你一個對我咁好...多謝你呀...
強:要以身相許架...]
敏:好.....難...(笑)
之後佢地就去左睇戲..食飯..
番到屋企...敏已經好攰...點知..琳,澄仲纏住佢...
琳:你今日做咩走堂呀>?
澄:今日個男仔叫咩名呀?你溝到佢呀?
琳:你唔好嘈住啦...我問緊野呀...
澄:喂...好似係我問先....
敏:喂....你地一次過問咁多野...點答
澄:係咪衰啦你...凌海琳...]
敏:好啦好啦...我去左海洋公園...個男仔叫歐俊強...
佢冇溝我...我冇溝佢...我唔係同佢拍拖...我同佢識左一日都未夠...
我好攰呀...聽日再講啦...
敏就去左沖涼訓啦....
2007-12-2 09:25 PM
☆小婷★
ch.4 冇啦...我既初吻冇啦
敏一番到學校...就將佢同俊個張台隔到無雷公咁完...
因為敏好憎佢...佢未試過咁憎一個人...
敏個心入面....憎恨...
俊一番到黎...見到佢地兩個將台分開左...
感覺上覺得呢個女仔好好玩...
俊呀..俊呀..你仲咩咁快對人改觀呀?
俊:做咩姐...好憎我呀?
俊從來都冇試過咁撩女仔...
敏冇理佢...心入面:白痴仔...仲使問既...
俊諗:哎呀~扮coo添....
俊:喂...做咩唔采人姐...
敏:你好煩呀...我點解要l采你姐...
俊:喂..靚妹...好串wo..
敏:對你咪係囉...
俊好鬼嬲...佢突然諗左樣衰野...
俊錫敏....敏超驚...佢d眼淚又標出黎...
敏諗:冇啦..我既初吻冇啦...仲要比左個衰人..
俊:你唔係呀?錫一錫都喊...
敏仲喊得勁左...
俊:你唔好話比我知呢個係你初吻?
敏成個跪左係地下到...
俊:唔好喊啦...sor...我唔知...
俊好內疚...
強走埋黎...
強:咩事呀?唔好喊啦...敏...(佢攬住敏)
敏覺得好有安全感...
俊講晒件事比佢聽...
強:傻女黎既...
敏:咁呢個係我初吻黎架ma.....(仲喊緊)
強:比左佢都唔錯呀...佢係好仔黎架...
敏:我唔覺..佢係衰人...
呢個時候...雯用d仇恨既目光望住敏...
雯:你竟然搶走呀俊?.....你唔會有好日子過
俊:家下我好失禮你咩/?
敏:少少咁啦...
俊:仲識串人...即係冇事啦...
敏覺得佢比強攬住個一刻...好有安全感...
好溫暖....
........待
2007-12-2 09:26 PM
☆小婷★
post到呢到先啦,請回覆~thx~
2007-12-2 09:51 PM
tinatwins
好睇廿..繼續NA..SUP
2007-12-3 10:42 AM
Hiu_-細曉
好睇牙!
加油sup你
2007-12-3 05:09 PM
【└鱔魚┘】
ho 睇唷...`
快d post多d喇...
待著....................*
2007-12-3 06:30 PM
§嵐嵐§
好睇呀,,,
po 多d,,,,
好心急,,,,
2007-12-16 03:23 PM
☆小婷★
ch.5 比人打既感覺唔好受
上集略略提過既雯...終於有搞作...
佢叫埋風d馬去打敏....
敏行番屋企個陣....
敏:咩事呀?(佢比人拉左係一條後行到...)
x:雯姐,係咪佢?
雯:係呀...唔該晒...
敏:你係邊個?你做咩捉我黎呢到?
雯:你連我都唔識...點係學校生活...
敏:我唔理你係邊個..咁你捉我黎呢到做咩呀?(驚ing)
雯:冇咩野...想警告你...唔好諗住搶走俊...佢係我架...
敏:你冇野呀ma?我搶走佢?
雯打左佢一巴...
雯:醒定d....(轉身走)
敏諗:關我咩事呀?點解要打我wo...我咁大個都未比人打過架..(喊)
風:靚女...做咩係到喊?
敏:風....我...都係冇野啦...(走)
風:喂...你冇野呀ma...
敏:冇野啦...拜拜
敏走左去...風覺得佢好莫名其妙...
敏喊得好勁...冇意欲停..
敏番到屋企...即刻扮番開心...佢唔想澄同琳擔心佢..
點知...第2日...
一番到學校...
俊就同佢d靚諗住打敏...
因為雯同佢講話敏打左佢一巴...俊信晒佢..
俊不嬲都當雯係妹妹...所以幫佢出頭...但雯就以為俊鍾意佢..
敏比人打到飛起...
俊:下次唔好撩事鬧非,,,
敏已經唔想再講野...唔知點解...佢琴日比雯打...
都冇咁hurt...但係比俊打...佢就好hurt...
敏走左上天台...
佢好想知道佢做錯d咩?佢點解要比人打...
佢係天台到訓著左...
醒番個陣...已經係忍ch time...
俊係班房到...冇出到去..
敏一番到去...佢就怒脾佢...
敏都冇出聲...個樣超唔開心...隻眼好紅..
俊覺得好唔開心...唔知點解...佢好似感受到佢份唔開心咁...
俊:你冇事呀ma?(溫柔...怒氣冇晒)
敏覺得佢好得人驚...佢今朝早個陣先打完佢...
個樣超恐怖...但係而家就好溫柔...
敏冇理到佢...
俊:你冇野ma?(佢抓全佢隻手)
敏:走開呀...(超超超超大聲)
俊估唔到佢有咁大反應...
強佢走左入黎...
強見到敏果個咁驚既樣...就攬住佢...
同佢走左出去...
課室得番俊一個...佢見到強攬住敏個陣...
個心唔識形容...
敏好唔開心...佢覺得比人打既感覺唔好受...尤其係比俊打.....
2007-12-16 03:23 PM
☆小婷★
ch.6 sorry...原諒我!
風:你地有冇搞錯..果個雯嗌你地你點人相..你就去...佢係大佬定我係大佬呀?
x:sor...風哥...
風:仲要傷到人..你點知人地咁多野...
x:咁...
風:咁咁咁...咁你以後跟佢啦...
x:好對唔住...
風同佢條靚去左敏個到...
x:sor呀...
風:咩叫sor呀...sorry呀...嗱...如果人地唔原諒你你就唔好跟我
x:sorry...
敏:算啦...你都冇份打我...
敏又行開左....敏呢排心事重重...唔知點解..
俊知道佢打錯人之後...就好想同佢講sorry...可惜一直都冇機會
.........班房......
俊:敏...我...對唔住呀..我知道...我..
敏佢寫左一張字仔比佢...
" 傷口撕裂後...再說要補救...有用嗎? ''
俊:我都同你講sorry啦...你仲想點?
又傅一張字條..." 我只係想我地保持番距離..冇必要唔好講野 "
俊:你諗住一世都唔同我講野?
敏點頭...
俊一股氣湧上心頭..佢就再冇出聲啦...
佢唔知道點解敏會企得咁硬,,,於是佢就問雯..
俊:雯..究竟你同敏有咩恩怨?
雯:我都唔知我得罪左佢d咩...佢打我...(扮可憐)
俊:你冇呃我?
雯:你信果個賤人都唔信我?
俊:你小心d講野..佢唔係賤人...以你既性格..你都會比人蝦?
雯:你飲左佢d迷湯呀?
俊冇出聲...
雯:係呀...係我屈佢呀...唔比咩?
俊:你....(兜打打落佢到)
作者的話:好好好...打得好...抵佢死...
雯跪左落地下到...佢估唔到佢同俊感情會比一個咁既女仔搞到咁...
其實一直都係佢一廂情願...俊都冇話過佢鍾意佢...
佢d怒氣直線上升...佢話既...有敏就就冇佢
作者的話;冇左你就好啦...拍手中
俊走去捉住敏隻手...一口氣跑左上天台...
敏:你捉我上黎做咩呀?你唔係想...喇..我嗌架
俊:你終於肯同我講野喇咩?(覺得佢好可愛)
敏:我唔想架....我費事果個雯又話我搶走你...跟住又打我...然後又要比你打..
你都係陪下你條女啦...唔係佢又周圍發顛打人...
俊知道佢真係好過份...因為敏係因為佢先比雯打..
但係之後佢又打敏...
俊跪左落地下....
俊:sorry...
敏比佢嚇親...
敏:喂,,,你起身先啦...唉..我原諒你啦...得未?
伋開心到成個彈起...錫左敏一啖...之後就走番落去..
敏呆呆咁企係原地...發自內心咁甜絲絲地笑....
2007-12-16 03:24 PM
☆小婷★
比人嚇牙- -"
~*~*~*~*~*~**~*~*~*~
ch.7 呷醋
俊同敏經過呢件事之後仲fd左添...去邊都一齊..除左去toliet...
俊想約敏食飯...
俊:今日一齊食飯呀...
敏:唔得呀...我約左人...
俊:咪推左佢囉...
敏:咁我應承左人地呀ma
俊:你只可以陪我...(嬲嬲地)
敏:點解呀?
俊:因為......我好似鍾意左你(超細聲)
敏:咩呀?講咩呀...
俊:因為你同我kiss過囉...同我kiss過既女仔淨係得你一個炸...
所以你係我既...你要陪我...
敏:采你都傻呀...(好可愛咁笑)
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學校門口....
敏係到等緊強...
俊係佢後面睇下佢約左邊個...
強出左黎...敏就同佢一齊行...
俊走左上去...撓住敏隻手...
敏:你做咩呀?(面紅)
俊同強都覺得佢好得意...
俊:我都話左你係我架啦/...你要陪我...(好似細路)
敏忍唔住笑...
敏:唔得呀...我約左佢...下次先啦,...
俊:唔得...一齊去呀...
佢地兩個未應承...俊就撓住敏隻手行左去...
強見到佢地兩個一路上打情罵悄..有d唔開心..
俊:哇...乜食沙拉咁健康呀....減肥
敏嬲嬲地...
敏:xx俊.......
佢地就係吵吵鬧鬧咁軍馱@個晏...
番到學校...有件超超超驚天動地既事...
miss:今個禮拜6學校有個舞會...請各位同學盛裝出席...
你地仲可以跳舞添...
男a:係咪同女仔跳先?
miss:各位女同學...對唔住...係
d男仔:yeah...
d女仔:x...
俊諗:我一定要請到敏跳舞...
小息既時候...超多男仔走埋黎請敏係個日同佢地跳舞...
俊唔知點解無名火起....
俊走埋黎錫呀敏
男a:妖...人地名花有主既....
男b:係囉....仲想約佢添...
敏:你做咩呀?(面紅)
俊:你面紅個樣好可愛...我就係鍾意你可愛既樣...
敏塊面仲紅過岩岩...
敏(佢咩意思呀....搞到我個心卜卜跳)
俊(哇....點解每次錫佢都咁有feel既...)
敏+俊(我好似....鍾意左佢)
2007-12-16 03:24 PM
☆小婷★
ch.8 灰姑娘與兩位王子
敏:琳琳...澄澄...你地兩個將我扮到似咩呀?
琳:哇...你睇下幾靚...
澄:係囉...幾靚...
敏上到鏡前面照一照...佢好似成個灰姑娘咁...好靚..
敏:乜呢個真係我黎架?
呢個時侯,琳同澄就行出黎...佢地兩個扮白雪公主...都幾cute呀....
佢地就咁番學校個晚會...佢地3個一入到去...個個都望住佢地3個...
男a:哇...好靚呀...我就話中間(敏)果個最靚..
男b:我就話左邊(琳)果個最靚
俊一見到敏行入黎...就想請佢跳舞...點知雯走出黎...
雯:不如你同我...
俊:我唔得閒呀...係咁啦...
俊想搵敏...但係敏已經唔見左....
強:may i...(向住敏)
敏諗住應承既時候...俊及時走到過黎...
俊:may i
敏望住兩個王子...唔知點選擇....佢...
突然之間...全場黑晒...黑到咩都睇唔到...有人將敏位開...
司儀:請各位去搵你地既parier啦...
敏咩都睇唔到...佢搵黎搵去....突然前面有個人將佢擋住..
係邊個呢?係....
敏:你係邊個...
強:敏...係咪你呀...
敏聽到強把聲...有d失望....
全場既燈開番...
司儀:let's dance
敏見到俊同雯一齊...好唔開心....
呢個時候...敏見到琳同緊一個男仔好開心咁dance...
果個男仔係耀....佢就好啦...同到佢鍾意既人一齊...
澄呢?澄同呀風dance緊...唉...敏佢覺得佢地好好采...
強:may i
敏:唔好意思...我有d唔舒服呀...我番屋企先啦...
強:...下...使唔使送你..?
敏:唔使...88(轉身)
強望住佢...俊都望佢走...佢推開雯...追左出去...
俊:敏...
敏:俊!你,,,你點解係到既?(驚喜)
俊:我黎搵你dance...
敏:你唔係同雯dance咩...(呷醋)
俊:e...有人呷醋....
敏:邊...邊有wo...我...只...不...過...奇...怪..姐...(口吃+怕醜)
俊:係呀...?
敏:係呀....唔係你以為咩呀...
俊:may i
敏:下...係呢到?
俊:55....你驚咩姐...黎啦
敏同俊就係到篇篇起舞...一個王子...一個公主...好夾...
同時...妒忌既眼光都望住佢地
2007-12-16 03:25 PM
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ch.9 保護你係我ge職責
星期6個晚佢地玩得好開心....
星期一番到學校...點解d氣芬咁奇怪?
周圍既人都好靜....
敏:咩事呀...點解...d人唔出聲既...發生咩事呀?
琳:你唔知咩?俊同隔離學校個大佬打交呀...係我地學校添...
敏:下...咁誇...知唔知為左咩呀?
琳:咁就唔知啦...
突然...有一個勁有大佬款既人走出黎....都幾靚仔...
俊走埋去敏個到...
敏:你唔好打交啦...我驚你有事....(緊張)
俊:你緊張我呀?(開心)
敏:........咪玩啦...我真係驚你有事.....
俊:唔使驚..我一定會贏...(勝利既笑+轉身)
敏諗左一陣....就大嗌:加油呀...一定要贏
佢講得好大聲...隔離d人都望住佢...呀大佬都係...
大佬:呢個女仔都幾靚wo...可惜呀...做左人地條女
大佬諗諗下....佢有個主意.....
佢突然間又話唔打....仲走埋...
俊:縮沙王...敏...行囉..上課室
敏:哦...(個心有d不詳預感)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
放學個陣....
敏自己一個行番屋企...
突然...有人行出黎....
敏:你做咩呀?你咪係今日果個...
彥:我叫呀彥...做我條女呀?
敏:下...你咁直接既....我唔可做你條女
彥:點解...因為果個呀俊?佢跟本配你唔起,.,,
敏:唔關你呀...你叫我做你條女..係因為鍾意我呀?唔係呀ma>..拜拜
彥佢捉住敏隻手...
彥:我係認真架...
敏:我要走啦...拜...
彥唔比佢走..俊佢走出黎打左彥一下...
俊:你唔好再煩住佢...
彥又打番佢一下...正確黎講..佢地係到打架...
敏:停手啦...俊我地行...
敏拉左俊走....
俊:點呀...你岩岩冇事呀ma?
敏:我點會有事呀...你有冇事呀?我好驚你整親..
俊:唔會...就算整到..我都要保護你..因為保護你係我既職責...
敏:.........我.....
俊:行啦...傻妹...
敏:做咩嗌人傻好wo..我叫敏呀!
俊:行啦...傻好敏...
敏:衰人俊....
就係咁..呢幾日就過左啦...
2007-12-16 03:25 PM
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ch.10 因為我鍾意左你
敏同強又約左去食飯...今次俊就冇去到...
強:敏...其實我鍾意左你好耐...由一見到你開始我就好鍾意...
敏:強呀...我..對唔住呀..我..
強:得啦...明既...你唔鍾意我呀ma..其實我都知既...
敏:我地仲有冇fd做...
強:我不嬲都係你既FD...
敏:多謝你...(笑)
強:感情呢d野唔可以隔硬黎...
番到學校...
俊:敏..你岩岩同呀強食飯呀?(唔高興_)
敏:係呀...
俊:咁你..地.....傾左d咩?
敏:佢話...佢...
俊:佢講咩呀?講啦...(惡)
敏:他咁鬼惡...唔鍾意講比你聽呀....何況你做咩咁8掛呀...
俊:因為...因為我鍾意左你...真係架..我對你係認真架...
敏:....我都鍾意.......你...
俊:好野....咁你係咪即係做我條女?
敏:@@@@@@@@@@@@.....係掛
俊:咁佢同你講咩呀?
敏:而家講咩都唔重要...
佢地放學去左睇戲..
俊:敏呀,,,呢到咁凍呀...著我件3
敏:咁你咪凍囉...
俊:我話過架..保護你係我既職責...
敏好感動咁笑笑...
佢地又去左聽海浪聲...
敏:肚餓呀...去買d野軍r...
俊:好呀...你係到等我..唔好行開..
敏坐係到靜靜咁聽聽海..
x:妹妹仔...一個人呀
r:等哥哥陪下你...
敏好驚...驚到唔夠膽出聲...
w:你寂寞呀...等我安" 慰 "下你
敏:唔.............................................使.........................唔該...
w:下....愈係話唔使...就愈係要...
俊及時番到黎...
俊:邊個搞我條女....(超超超惡)
x:冇...玩下姐...
w:走啦...
俊:你仲咩理d人呀...你唔出聲佢咪唔理你囉...下...你知唔知我擔心你既...
你有咩事我點算呀?
雖然係咁鬧敏..但係敏好開心...因為佢feel到...俊好緊佢..
敏笑...
俊:你仲笑...
敏:對唔住呀...我下次唔會架啦..
俊:哼...
敏唔好嬲啦...最多我錫錫...
俊:你話架...
敏錫左佢一啖...
俊:好啦...原諒你...
敏:點解你....
俊:因為我根好好好好好鍾意你...
2007-12-16 03:25 PM
☆小婷★
ch.11 思表妹強勢回歸
俊:咩話...表妹番黎?
俊媽:我之前同你講過啦..係你唔係點上心...
俊:佢番黎做咩呀?
俊媽:你今日要接佢機呀...4點鍾去到機場喇,,,
俊:喂...我連佢咩樣都唔知...
俊媽:舉牌囉
俊:x...舉牌呾樣衰
俊媽:詳情我寫左落告示板到...係咁啦...88]]
俊:5..bye
(一生不愛別人...只愛你)俊電話響
俊:喂...敏呀...
敏:55...今日我地去邊呀...
俊:仇日我唔得呀..我要去接表妹機呀...
敏:哦...咁算啦..
俊:咁好啦...88
敏:88
4點機場
俊係到舉牌
有一個幾靚女既女仔行左埋黎
女:俊表哥...好耐冇見喇...
俊:你係思表妹?
思:係呀...好掛住你呀...(撓住俊隻手)
俊:係呀...(fing開佢隻手)
思:俊表哥...你變左...
俊:下....]
思:你以前好錫我架..仲話...大個會娶我添...
俊:細細個唔識野姐....我地番屋企先啦
屋企...
思:姨媽...好耐冇見啦
俊媽:係呀...哇...思思大個女左..靚左好多...
思:你唔好讚我啦...
俊媽趁俊上左房...就話...
俊媽:黠呀...俊表哥對你點呀.
思:好冷淡呀..唉
俊媽:可能係同你未熟姐...你比d心出黎同佢聯繫下感情...
你知啦...你遲d要同俊結婚
俊同思係好細個已經有婚約...俊媽亦都好鍾意思...只係俊唔知
點知比俊聽到....
俊:我係唔會娶佢...
俊媽:你知唔知自己係到講緊咩?(惡)
俊:我知...亦好清楚...我係唔會娶佢...
俊媽:我唔理...第時你一定要娶佢...因為你地早有婚約
俊:個d所謂既婚約只係你地呢d自私自利既大人訂落黎架炸
俊媽:衰仔...你幾時變到咁...
思:我出一出去(想喊)
俊媽:你去搵下佢啦...思佢人生路不熟
俊追左出去...
俊:思...做咩姐...
思:俊表哥...你唔要我...你唔娶我
俊:對唔住呀...我已經有女朋友....我認定左佢係我結婚對像
思:思思都好鍾意你架...
俊:俊表哥知...
思:我會你個女朋友公平競爭
俊:但係我最後都會揀佢...
思係到喊...
俊攬住佢....
俊:乖啦...唔好喊啦...
敏同琳咁岩係到經過..
琳:e...果個咪呀俊..佢攬住個女仔...
敏:唔會既...
敏一睇..果個真係呀俊...
敏:呱...果個係佢表妹..
琳:表妹會咁親密咩?
敏:..........
俊佢發現到敏望住佢...即刻推開思...搵敏解釋
2007-12-16 03:26 PM
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ch.12 信我...我愛你
敏係咁係到跑...可能琳講得岩...表妹會咁親密...
俊亦都知道自己做錯左啦...佢跑去搵敏...
思呆呆咁企係原地...佢唔知發生咩事...更加唔相信表哥會番低佢一個係到...
敏跑到攰攰地...就企左係到...
彥:hi...
敏:hi...(喊緊)
彥:發生咩事呀?個衰仔俊對你唔好...
敏:唔使理我...
彥:我點可以唔理你呀...你而家咁既樣...(捉住佢隻手)
敏:我自己搞得掂架啦(fing開佢隻手)
彥:聽我講...我會比佢愛你多一萬倍...(捉住佢既博頭)
敏:sor..
俊見到彥捉住敏...就打佢...
敏:你做咩打人...
俊:你究竟鬧我...
敏:我唔想同你講任何野...(轉身走)
俊追住佢...
俊:敏,你聽我講...佢係我表妹...我攬住佢係因為佢喊緊..
佢喊係因為我話第時唔會娶佢...我話我已經認定你係我
既結婚對象...信我...我愛你...
敏開始停低腳步...聽佢講野...
俊:我淨係會鍾意果個比我搶走左初吻...跟住係到喊既女仔..
我鍾意佢夠可愛...佢比人讚個陣塊面會紅...我鍾意佢
會同我鬥咀...咩野都唔讓我既佢...我愛佢個人夠真...
我愛佢因為我愛佢...永遠都係...我知道我成日都傷左佢既心...
但係我確實係好愛佢...就算我第時死左...我都希望我會停留係佢身
邊保護佢...愛你...只要佢笑..我就會好開心...信我...我愛你...
敏一路聽一路喊...佢相信俊講既野係真既...
敏跑過攬住俊...
敏:俊...我愛你...
俊:傻妹...唔好喊...我要你成為全世界最開心既女仔...
敏:.....(喊得好勁)
俊同敏印乾d眼淚...
思睇到晒...係佢印象中果個好cool果個俊表哥...係唔會咁去追一個女仔...
更加唔會講一d咁感動既樣去哄一個女仔...佢估俊一定係好鍾意呢個叫敏既女仔...
但係佢都好鍾意俊表哥..佢想搶番佢番黎...
彥都好hurt...佢知道俊係好鍾意敏..敏都係好鍾意俊..
佢地兩個攬左好耐...
但係俊冇提過佢同思有婚約個單野...佢驚敏聽左之後會揀放棄佢...
佢地去左沙灘到...欣賞呢個好靚既夜晚...
呢一刻..佢地兩個都覺得好幸福...
俊:敏...如果有一日...我變成左一隻蝴蝶...你仲會唔會認得我...
敏:如果係你既話...我一定認得....因為有你既地方...就會有d野感應住我...
俊:敏....
敏:做咩姐..咁我講真架...
俊:無論我地發生咩事...第時都要一齊...永生永世都唔好分開...
敏好大力咁點頭...
佢地今晚兩個都冇番屋企....
2007-12-16 03:26 PM
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ch.13 婚約上
俊:訂婚?冇可能...
俊媽:你一定要同佢結婚....你地兩個早有婚約...
俊:我唔怕同你講...我有女朋友架啦...
俊媽:你而家仲細...你遲d就會同佢分開架啦...
俊:我地係唔會分開架...你嗌思死左條心佢啦..
俊媽:我唔理..總之你地兩個21歲就要結婚...
俊:你好煩呀...
思睇住呢個好cool既表哥...平時都唔多野講...點解佢今日會為左呢個
叫敏既女仔同姨媽大吵一場?佢唔明...點解表哥為佢付出咁多....
思覺得敏配唔起俊表哥...佢想搶俊表哥番黎....
第2日早上...
思同俊一齊番學....一入到學校..
人人都被思既美貌吸引住...男既鍾意...女既羨慕...
思好似好唔習慣呢種眼光....
班房
miss:今日有個新同學...
全班:男定女先?
miss:女...
男:wow...唔知靚唔靚?
思行入去...
人人都靜晒...因為已經比佢個樣吸引住...
男a:我一定要溝佢...
男b:佢做我女朋友就好啦
miss:xx思...你坐係俊同學隔離啦
俊:咁敏坐邊呀?
miss:佢坐耀隔離啦...
俊:下..咁點解唔可以調思坐耀隔離..
敏:算啦...唔緊要啦...我調...
俊:唔好啦...
敏:乖啦....
成班:wow...你地兩個...
敏塊面紅晒...
俊:咩姐...拍拖咪拍拖囉...唔比呀..
思好似好難為情咁...
耀:呀嫂...早晨呀...
敏:衰仔...玩野...
耀:你地點解會一齊既?
敏:咁佢同我示愛...我又鍾意佢...咪同佢一齊囉...
耀:wow...
敏:咁你呢?有冇拍拖呀?(幫琳收料)
耀:我冇呀...鍾意既人就有一個...
敏:係邊個呀???講啦..
耀:......係...琳...
敏笑得超勁...俊見到佢同第2個男仔玩得咁開心...有d唔高興
耀:你笑咩姐...
敏:你點解鍾意佢...?(仲笑緊)
耀:我上一次同佢跳舞個陣...就鍾意左佢...
敏:咁你一定要同佢示愛...
耀:點....解
敏:因為佢都鍾意你...
耀係到笑//...
小息...
思:敏..我想同你傾兩句...
敏:好呀...
思:我唔想你抱咁大期望係俊到...
敏:下..]
思:因為我同佢早就有婚約係身...我地一到左21歲...就會結婚..
2007-12-16 03:27 PM
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ch.14 婚約下
敏:你講咩呀?你講多一次...
思:接受現實啦...對唔住..
敏:咪住...俊佢知唔知你同佢有婚約?
思:知...(走)
敏個心入面有好多疑惑...佢唔知俊係咪玩佢...
咁俊之前同佢講果d甜言蜜語呢?唔通全部都係虛構?
敏佢跑走左...跑左去海邊...
又諗番起俊之前同佢既回憶...
喊喊喊...除左喊...敏就唔知可以做咩...
敏開手機...諗住打比琳同澄報平安...
點知...有31個未接來電...俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊...
全部都係俊打黎...
敏打番比俊...
俊:你去左邊到呀...你冇事呀ma..做咩笠聲唔出就走左去呀?
敏:你出黎海邊呀...我有野搵你...
俊:哦...好呀..一間見
冇幾耐..俊就黎到...
俊見到敏塊面上面有兩條清晰既淚痕...用埋紅腫既眼...就知佢喊過..
俊:你做咩喊呀?(攬住敏)
敏推開佢...
俊:發生咩事呀?
敏:你同思係咪有婚約?
俊:.......
敏:咁即係你知啦....你做咩呃我呀?
俊:我呃你係因為我愛你...
敏:我唔會再信你...
俊:敏...你聽我講...我同佢既婚約係系我地好細個果陣定落架...
我同佢 0 感情...
敏:真係既?
俊:真架...我只係鍾意你...
敏:.......嗯...我信你....
俊:唔好亂諗野...我一定會同佢取消婚約...
敏:唔...
2007-12-16 03:27 PM
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ch.15 同我一齊...我會比到幸福你
思同雯做左好朋友...因為佢地有共同既敵人..----敏
雯將思同俊有婚約係身呢件事唱左出去...想敏知難而退...
澄:琳琳呀...敏敏呢排好似心事重重咁既...
琳:可能係因為俊同思有左婚約呱....難怪佢會咁既...
如果耀耀同第2個女仔有左婚約...而且21歲就要果個人結婚...我都會咁...
澄:你同耀一齊啦?
琳:係呀...佢同我示愛架...
澄:你就好啦...風身邊咁多女...點會睇得上我...
琳:比d心機啦...
呢一邊....強同敏傾緊計...
強:你呢排好似冇咩精神咁既?
敏:係咩?唔夠訓呱...
強:唔好咁啦...我相信俊係鍾意你既...
敏冇出聲....原來佢已經係到喊緊...
強:唔好喊啦....佢值得你為佢喊咩?
敏:..............
強:你同我一齊呀...我會比到幸福你架...
敏依然冇講到野...強攬住佢...
雯同思影左強攬住佢果張相...
雯:搞掂....
放學............
俊:李思敏...你係咪同左強一齊?
敏:你講咩呀...
俊:你自己睇下...
敏:你鍾意話我係咪係囉...橫豎你遲d都要同你表妹結婚架啦...
我地都唔一齊得耐....
俊:你唔信我...我會同佢取消婚約架...
敏:係咩?
俊:你當然想我唔係啦...咁你就可以同強一齊...
敏:至少佢真係會錫我...你呢?你淨係搞到我唔開心....
俊:咁你咪同佢一齊囉...滿意未呀?分手囉...
敏:你話架...謝子俊...
俊:我話咪我話囉....
敏轉身走左去...佢唔知自己跑左去邊到...佢淨係知道佢d眼淚忍唔住啦...
俊企係原地...留出兩行眼淚...一直係到睇戲既敏同思都估唔到俊會喊....
思跑上去攬住俊....
思:俊表哥...佢唔愛你...仲有好多人鍾意你架...
俊:你行開呀...
思:俊表哥...
俊:你走開呀!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(超大聲)
思都忍唔住喊...佢做咁多野..都博唔到俊既歡心...
第2日....
琳+澄:起身啦...
敏:我唔番啦....我唔舒服呀 呀...
琳:咁呀...
敏:咁你地番學先啦...我訓下...你同我去請假...
澄:咁好啦..88
琳同澄出左門口....敏就起左身...
其實敏咩事都冇...琳+澄都知...不過由佢...
敏唔想面對俊...佢知道俊同佢gameover
俊:琳...點解思敏冇番學?
琳:唔知呢可...(唔想講比佢知)
俊:請你講比我知...我知錯架啦...
琳:算啦...謝子俊...而家知錯已經太遲...
澄:你跟本就係玩思敏...你唔好再煩佢啦...
俊:我唔係...我真係愛佢...
琳:愛佢既話就唔會屈佢啦...
俊:你話...我怪錯左佢...
強走埋黎...
強:梗係啦...佢個陣好唔開心...係到喊緊..我只不過係安慰佢炸...
你知唔知你好好采...你可以同敏一齊...我呢?我鍾意佢又點?
直到琴日..我向佢第2度示愛..佢依然無動於衷...因為佢鍾意你呀...
佢唔想你夾係思同佢之間...佢唔想咁痛苦炸...佢為你付出咁多...
你呢?你就係識得怪佢...我覺得你比唔到幸福佢...
俊:我....
琳:你如果仲係愛佢既話...就追番佢番啦...
俊呆呆咁企係到...佢知道...佢做錯左...