原]]小女第一作...∫ ]` 失 戀 ﹏ 就 是 惡 夢 的 開 始 } ` ◆ *ﻬ

∫  ]` 失 戀 ﹏ 就 是 惡 夢 的 開 始  } ` ◆ *ﻬஐஐ

[color=Red]角色:
牙琳﹏一個幾令同傻傻地既女仔...平凡...讀書５係好叻...
牙瑤﹏一個勁索同好多人追既女仔...成績超好...牙琳個ＦＤ...
牙雪﹏姣名遠播既姣婆...樣子ok...中意同人搶仔...
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牙海﹏一個成日曠課...但係成績超好...超型仔...好多女仔"死"係佢手上...必要時...會幫人...
牙山﹏好人一名...中意牙琳...同牙瑤示愛好幾次...但係牙瑤次次拒絕...ＨｕＲｔ
牙軒﹏一件被封鎖既牛排...暗戀牙琳...好幾想自殺...多得牙琳...仲未死得...
牙樹﹏牙琳中意既男仔...而家係美國讀書...一直靠書信來往同牙琳{傾計}...就黎死...
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M i S s  c H a N ﹏豬排一名...

[p.s.呢間中學同小學係一定要直升既...]
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第一章:       惡夢﹏降臨

F.1既開學日.牙琳自己係度行緊...
牙琳*又要番學牙...唉...*
牙瑤 *5駛唉啦...學就一定要番既...你估我地係某D人...可以成日曠課咩...*
牙琳 *嘩...*
牙瑤 *咩牙...牙琳...*
牙琳 *前...面...*
牙瑤 *真係日頭5好講人...夜晚5好講鬼...*
牙琳 *好認同...*
點解佢地咁講呢?
因為牙海就企係冇遠既地方
聽緊佢地講野
個樣仲好似好嬲添...
根住牙海行去佢地面前..
牙海 *講緊邊個牙...小妹妹...*
牙瑤 *冇...講緊個個a君姐...*
牙海 *算你好彩...下次...小心行路行行下仆街呀...*
-------------------------------------------班入面----------------------------------------------
M i S s  c H a N  *大家好...我係你地既班主任...我...*
牙海 *咪講埋哂d老土對白啦...mIsS...我冇你咁得閒牙...*
MiSs cHaN *你...*
牙海 *我咩牙我...*
MiSs cHaN *算...*
牙海 *mIsI...做人5可以就咁算嫁...*
MiSs cHaN *...*
牙海 *mIsS cHaN....仲5快d分位...*
mIsS cHaN *好啦...而家開始分位啦...*
牙琳 *牙瑤...我想同你坐牙...*
牙瑤 *mE ToO 啦...*
----------------------------------------------分位------------------------------------------------
MiSs ChAn *而家開始分位...*
同學 *哦...*
MiSs ChAn *......xx琳...坐個度...*
牙琳 *牙瑤...*
牙瑤 *5緊要...*
MiSs cHaN *仲講...*
牙琳 *哦...*
MiSs cHaN *xx海...你坐xx琳隔離...*
牙瑤 *老師...我反對...*
mIsS ChAn *5得...*
牙瑤 *妖...*
mIsS cHaN *咩話...*
牙瑤 *擺明就係廣東話啦...*[[細聲]]
-----------------------------------------牙琳---------------------------------------------------
牙琳 *死啦...又係佢...啱啱先見識完佢D態度...點算...*[[心諗]]
牙海 *又係你...哈哈...你呢個學期都5會好過...嘻嘻...*
+++++++++++++[作者:牙琳好慘牙...惡夢真係降臨咗...]+++++++++++

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第二章:     受傷﹏

係開學日個日...就即刻要上堂...真係慘...
---------------------------------------------體育堂----------------------------------------------
mIsS ChAn *而家要兩個人一組...5該...快D分好...*
牙琳 *好野...可以同你一組啦...*
牙瑤 *55...好野...*
MiSAs ChAn *5記得咗同你地講...要一男一女bO...*
牙瑤 *妖...頂佢個肺...*
牙琳 *55...*
牙瑤 *又5早響...*
牙琳 *55...*
mIsS ChaN *快d分啦...*
咁d學生就係度分組啦...
牙山 *牙瑤...我同你一組牙...好5好...*
牙瑤 *點解我要同你一組wo...*
牙山 *因為...我愛你...* [跪咗係度]
牙瑤 *快d起身啦...* [面紅]
牙山 *你5應承...我一世都5起身...*
牙瑤 *好啦...好啦...我同你一組啦...*
牙山 *好野...*
牙瑤 *小小事...要跪wo..會5會誇張咗d牙...*
牙山 *5會...5會...我為咗你...做咩都仔牙...*
牙瑤 *好嘔心牙你...*
---------------------------------------MiSS cHaN----------------------------------------------
mIsS ChAn *剩低個D同學...我黎幫你地分組啦...*
剩低個D同學 *下...*
MiSs cHaN *5駛下...*
牙海 *頂佢個肺牙...佢幫我分組...*
MiSs chAn *好...既然牙琳同學係同牙海同學坐...咁你地就一組啦...*
牙琳 *下...*
牙海 *妖...*
---------------------------------------------分組活動--------------------------------------------
MiSs cHaN *好啦...而家開始分組活動...*
牙瑤 *會有D咩分組活動牙...咪又係D無聊野...*
MiSs cHaN *至於係咩分組活動呢...就等等先話比你地知....*
牙山 *等等先話比我地知...遲早都知嫁啦...駛5駛等等先話比我地知....*
牙瑤 *55...*
牙山 *無聊...*
MiSs cHaN *我地要手握住手...腳對住腳...跟住互扯...做拉跟動作...*
牙瑤 *下...攪咗半日...就係攪呢D野...*
牙山 *拉跟...一年班都5做啦...*
牙瑤 *55...*
--------------------------------------------牙海同牙琳--------------------------------------------
牙琳 *牙海同學...老師話要拉跟牙...*
牙海 *我夠知啦...*
牙琳 *咁可5可以伸手同伸腳出黎牙...*
牙海 *O啦...*
牙琳 *O啦...點解...*
牙海 *Oh...mY GoD...*
牙琳 *點解要Oh...mY GoD...牙...*
牙海 *o啦...係解ok啦...o 5 o ...*
牙琳 *哦...O...*
咁佢地就伸哂手伸哂腳出黎拉跟啦...
牙海 *用d力啦...冇食飯牙...*
牙琳 *係牙...真係冇食飯牙...*
牙海 *...*
牙琳 *只係食咗個蛋糕...*
牙海 *繼續拉跟啦...*
牙琳 *哦...*
牙海 *我用力嫁啦...*
牙琳 *下...*
牙琳比牙海用力一蚊...
牙琳 *牙...好痛牙...*
牙海 *下...整親邊度牙...*
牙琳 *5知牙...好痛牙...*
MiSs  cHaN *發生咩事牙...*
牙海 *佢整親牙...*
mIsS cHaN *下...點算牙...要點做牙...*
牙海 *要送佢去醫療室牙...快D啦...
MiSs cHaN *抱5起牙...我5夠力牙...*
牙海 *等我黎啦...*
牙海就抱起牙琳...
但係牙琳以經失去知覺...

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[color=Red][size=6]睇完要回牙...[/size][/color]

[[i] 本帖最後由 草莓貓 於 2007-4-16 05:23 PM 編輯 [/i]]

冇人回既...
T_T...
睇完要回牙...
5係要打打...
要比意見牙...

第三章:   一封信﹏

-----------------------------------------------醫院------------------------------------------------
醫生 *xx琳既情況...*
牙海 *點樣牙...*
mIsS CHan *咪嘈住哂啦...*
醫生 *佢只不過輕微咁整親脊骨姐...*
牙海 *好彩...*
mIsS chAn *真係好好彩...如果5係...你敗哂副身家都未倍到牙...*
牙海 *而家都冇事啦...*
mIss cHaN *咁如果有事呢...你要照顧佢一世嫁...*
牙海 *一世...*
MiSs ChAn *冇錯...就係一世...*
牙海諗咗一陣...
牙琳 *醫生...我走得未牙...我要上堂嫁...*
醫生 *未得住...最早都一定要遲多一個鍾...*
牙琳 *一個鍾...我要接我細佬妹放學bo...仲要教佢做功課...*
MiSs ChAn *xx海...到你發揮功效既時候啦...*
牙海 *下...我...*
mIsS chAN *你而家即刻番學校同XX琳執書包...跟住拎黎呢度...快D啦...*
牙海 *哦...*
牙海就9秒9咁跑番學校啦...
----------------------------------------------學校--------------------------------------------------
牙瑤 *牙琳佢有冇事牙...佢有咩三長兩短...我都同你死過...*
牙海 *怇冇事牙...*
牙瑤 *好彩...*
牙山 *牙海...你番黎做咩牙...*
牙海 *執書包囉...*
牙山 *哦...你記住同我問候下佢牙...*
牙海 *好牙...*
牙海就開始同牙琳執書包啦...
牙海 *點解好似有D野咁既...睇睇先...*
牙海 *哦...原來係一封信...睇下寫咩先...*

-------------------------------------信----------------------------------
牙琳:
你近排點牙...我好掛住你牙...
我而家生活得好好...你5駛擔心...[你會擔心嗎...]
我有一個好消息同壞消息...5知你想聽邊個先...
我估你會想聽好消息先...因為我想你5好咁難過...
登登登...好消息就係我可以跳級...而家讀F.7啦...
你一定好開心姐...不過...壞消息係...我啱啱做完
bodycheck...個結果出咗黎...佢話我有未期癌症...
仲係血癌...冇得醫嫁啦...我係臨終前...好想食到
你親手煮既公仔麵...你可5可以速遞過黎牙...
但係...碗公仔麵會5會以經發咗x...5食得呢...
我好想見多你一面牙...88啦...
by...牙樹
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牙海 *呢封信好感人牙...睇到我都有d眼濕濕tim...*

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[[i] 本帖最後由 草莓貓 於 2007-4-14 05:42 PM 編輯 [/i]]

過份普通 ;]
仲有;
他們所說的說話不似中學說的 `
似小學 ,,

十卜呢,,,,嘻嘻=]

我覺得都ok ar....都係十卜十卜